Friday, March 11, 2011

Table of Contents

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<p align="center"><a href="http://tannishac-eportfolio.blogspot.com/2011/03/letter.html">All About Me</a></p>
<p align="center"><a href="http://tannishac-eportfolio.blogspot.com/2011/03/analyzing.html">Analyzing</a></p>
<p align="center"><a href=http://tannishac-eportfolio.blogspot.com/2011/03/edward-scissorhands.html>Edward Scissorhands</a></p>
<p align="center"><a href="http://tannishac-eportfolio.blogspot.com/2011/03/revision.html">Revision</a></p>
<p align="center"><a href="http://tannishac-eportfolio.blogspot.com/2011/03/facebook.html">Facebook</a></p>
<p align="center"><a href="http://tannishac-eportfolio.blogspot.com/2011/03/writing-for-audience.html">Writing for an Audience</a></p>
<p align="center"><a href="http://tannishac-eportfolio.blogspot.com/2011/03/american-stereotypes.html">American Stereotypes</a></p>
<p align="center"><a href="http://tannishac-eportfolio.blogspot.com/2011/03/writers-choice.html">Writer's Choice</a></p>
<p align="center"><a href="http://tannishac-eportfolio.blogspot.com/2011/03/identity.html">Identity</a></p>
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Letter

My name is Tannisha Curless and this is my second quarter studying at Everett Community College. As a student, my only goal right now is to further my education and better myself as a person. I would like to gain a better understanding of the world in general so that I can gain enough perspective to one day achieve my dream of being a guidance or drug/alcohol counselor. I try my hardest to give meaning to everyday things and find new ways to describe things. I do not consider myself a particularly strong writer, but I do enjoy the mental release of a nice long essay.
This course has allowed me to delve deeper into my thoughts on identity. I do not believe that my opinions have necessarily changed, but they have definitely come out from hiding. Though aware of the importance of identity in a person’s life, I had never really given much thought to why that was true. Also, it was really interesting and enlightening to read about what people felt defined them. Since I have never really felt that ethnicity was a key factor in my identity, it was fascinating to read about people like Firoozeh Dumas who seems almost solely defined by her ethnicity as well as Gloria Anzaldua who found a great importance in her native tongue.
It was also interesting to read about all the different communities people belonged to. Unless I am looking, I do not notice how many different types of communities there truly are. I feel like the community unit really opened my eyes to what it means to be a part of a community and what a community truly is.
The tradition unit was not my favorite because I am not a person who is big on tradition. I like when things change and are different every time. While traditions are not personally important or relevant to me, it was a little interesting to read about some of the traditions like arranged marriages. It is interesting how much freedom people will give up in the name of religion or tradition.
My piece that demonstrates my critical thinking skills is my timed write after watching and discussing “Edward Scissorhands.” I chose this piece because I believe that my analysis of outsider themes in the movie was detailed and well-written. The paper that I chose to revise was my tradition unit paper titled “Facebook.” I chose to revise it because I believe it was missing a lot in the description and conclusion department. I chose a blog about tradition titled “American Stereotypes,” to demonstrate how I write when considering the audience and my personal voice. The final piece I chose was my identity unit paper, cleverly titled “Identity.” In this paper I discuss in detail what identity is and how ethnicity, gender, and appearance shape and define it. I believe that my portfolio could not do without this piece because it was my strongest work this quarter.
This quarter helped me to gain a deeper understanding of identity, community, tradition, and me. My educational growth can be examined by the pieces I have chosen. The mental journey that I took through this class is obvious. I had strong pieces of work and some that probably could have used a little more thought or effort, but all in all, I bettered myself as a writer and a reader by taking this course.

Analyzing

       In a timed write, we were required to address the themes of outsiders in one of a list of films. The movie I chose to watch was “Edward Scissorhands.” In my analysis of the movie, I discussed why the outsiders in the movie were outsiders and what that meant. During part of my analysis of Edward, I stated, “Hearsay has an important role in the stereotypical suburban community and rumors of the crime and his alleged rape of Joyce spread so far that people begin to shun Edward. They decide that he is too different and therefore dangerous.” In this paragraph I was describing why Edward became a target for hate and what happened when he did. This paper helped me grow as an analytical writer because it forced me to look for the deeper meaning in the material and provide my own insight. By taking the time to truly study the movie, I gained more perspective on the central themes and therefore had a more fulfilling cinematic experience. Analysis works to support a paper by providing an explanation for the “why” of things. When you analyze something you gain a better understanding of what it really means.

Edward Scissorhands

In the film, "Edward Scissorhands," there are several examples of outsiders. The film uses a very storybook version of an outsider with Edward, who is simply feared because of his physical differences. We also see the idea of the outsider who blends well with Peg and Kim. While Peg is an Avon lady who seeks only to feel like she is doing something with her life other than lounging and gossiping, no one seems to support her efforts. Kim is an outsider because even when no one else was defending Edward, she did because she saw him as a person and not as only a deformity to be avoided. The cheery suburban area in which the characters reside leaves little room for individuality. Anyone who steps outside the lines is rejected or shamed unless they manage to somehow blend or stand out in a way that people appreciate. An outsider is someone who does not fit in with a group or community because of some difference in appearance, views, or way of life.

Edward is the most obvious example of an outsider. At the beginning of the movie, the gossipy women of the town are excited to meet and get to know the strange new man that Peg brought home. One religious neighbor does initially see Edward as some sort of devil creation and believes that he doesn't belong, but everyone is so dazzled that they ignore her for a while. Though incredibly different, Edward begins to fit in by cutting bushes and hair. It is only once Edward is accused of breaking and entering, and he rejects Joyce, that people begin to not like or trust him. Hearsay has an important role in the stereotypical suburban community and rumors of the crime and his alleged rape of Joyce spread so far that people begin to shun Edward. They decide that he is too different and therefore dangerous. His rejection is similar to the way they ignored Peg in her efforts to sell Avon.

From the beginning of the movie, it is obvious that the group mentality of the community was way to uniformity centered to ever truly accept Edward. Upon meeting him, people wanted to change him, regardless of his unique gifts or talents. They would rather have another cloned member of the community than to have this individual man with a special skill. Being an outsider or different was something that no one ever really accepted about Edward. The movie defines an outsider as someone like Edward. He may seem at first to fit in, but eventually, people get tired of him and the novelty of his differences wears off leaving nothing but a scary creature that they must rid themselves of.

This movie affirms my views on what it means to be an outsider. People get so caught up in fitting in that they think everyone else should be just as wrapped up in the idea of similarity. Popularity is way too important for people. At some point you see Kim start to branch out, even at the risk of rejection from her peers, because she knows that the way people are treating Edward is wrong. If more people could stand up for themselves and others, people would not bully each other as much. In the movie Jim died because he attacked Edward in a close-minded rage. Edward would probably have been hurt too if the unfeeling mob had reached him. An outsider is someone whose differences are so great that people feel their ways of life are being challenged. While Edward truly did not challenge anyone, just his presence went against what they believed and that made him dangerous to their way of life.

The people of this community are so similar, that anyone even slightly different is looked down upon. Edward got along with everyone when he first came to live with Peg. After time, he was not as exciting and the rumors took his reputation down to the very lowest peg possible. People in that town didn't commit crimes, and Edward was a criminal. Then they realized that people can't look like Edward and be safe or normal. They tried to use him and change him, but in the end, his physical differences were so overwhelming that they tried to destroy him. He was an outsider simply because of how he looked.

Revision

  I chose this assignment because I believed that it could use a revision. The original assignment description required that I write about an innovation that has changed a long standing tradition. I decided to use Facebook as the innovation that morphed the tradition of phone and e-mail use. Some of the strengths in my writing were detailed comparisons of old ways versus the new trends. I believe my essay had good examples that were strongly supported. Weaknesses of the paper included not writing a conclusion. The paper just ends without any sort of attempt to wrap things up. Also, I believe the topic may not have perfectly fit with the assignment. A final weakness of the paper was that along with the conclusion, a lot of points were missing or were not described as well as they could have been. For the revision, I added more detail and examples and created a sound conclusion.

Facebook

The way people communicate has evolved over the years. As people we have gone from pictures, to writing, to telephones and long-distance transportation. Every few years, advancements are made in the field of communication. Recently, a profound innovation has been formed. Facebook is the new telephone or e-mail. It reaches globally which dissolves many of the boundaries that people once had in regards to keeping in touch. However, Facebook does not just make it easier and more cost efficient to stay in touch with friends and family far away. It also allows us to stay in contact those who live close, but we still may not have the time or resources to see in person. It crushes the cellphone because it is free with all internet use and it eliminates the e-mail because it allows for simpler mass sharing. Of course, it is not even necessary to go into how Facebook (and the internet in general) have taken away from the once cherished, and now not as convenient, face to face conversations. Facebook is a recent step towards improving and expediting our human interactions that has morphed the way people once communicated.
            The Facebook wall is the most common place of interaction. While lacking much in privacy, it is quick and gets to the point of whatever someone feels like telling their friend. A quick message is sometimes all that is desired and while it is not important or urgent enough to call someone about; people still would like to share. Also, posting something on someone's wall takes away the pressure of immediate response. If someone does not pick up their phone, people may wait so long for the call back, that they may not even remember what they wanted to say. Facebook eliminates this problem by allowing you to post to someone's wall whenever is desired. Another great thing about posting to someone's wall is that others can comment on it. Since the sight is public to your friends at least, anytime someone talks to someone else, the conversation is visible and can easily be joined. This allows for people to meet or get to know each other's friends or for a group of friends to all talk at once. By creating these bonds with possible strangers, the wall post also opens the door for new friendships. In the Onion's satirical article about the false malfunction of MySpace (pre-cursor to Facebook), they speak of the importance of the friend maintenance that is provided by this site. "If I have to revert back to face-to-face friend gathering, I would be middle-aged before I built that number into the double digits. I'd definitely never get back into the hundreds again," (pg. 160). While an obvious exaggeration, this little contact between colleagues on a wall may be the only way that people can interact which makes Facebook a very important and valuable tool.
The status option on Facebook is probably the most important feature for the aforementioned reasons. Rather than having the same conversation with people over and over to tell them the funny thing that happened yesterday, the status allows us to share that funny story, fact, or whatever it is we want to share, with all of our friends at once. While limiting to in person conversations, it is a lot more efficient and less tiresome than repeating the same thing a million times. People take the few minutes to update everyone on the newest, most interesting thing in their lives and then can move on with their day. A status is also a replacement for group conversations because you can involve every single person you know without going through all that it would take to bring together friends, family and colleagues and have a nice conversation where everyone gets a chance to say their piece. There is no way to interrupt someone and since it is typed rather than said, conversations are more concise and to the point this way. Status’ open the door wide open for local and global sharing.
            Another Facebook feature that makes it more appealing to the masses than actually talking is IM'ing. While there are thousands of sites to instant message from, Facebook eliminates the hassle of exchanging e-mails or usernames with everyone by allowing people to IM with everyone on their friends list. This feature can replace anything from a text message, to a phone call, to a chat over coffee. Facebook IM makes it unnecessary to collect phone numbers as well because if someone wishes to speak with someone every once in a while, but has no desire to give out their number, he can add the person on Facebook. Also, this eliminates costly texting bills and the need to purchase so many minutes for a cellphone. Since Facebook is free, it almost makes a cellphone unnecessary.
            The number one benefit of Facebook is that it is free. Phones are almost a necessity in this day and age. No one has time to meet face to face anymore. Bills for phones are going up as the need to communicate on the go increases. However, with internet innovations like Facebook, you don’t need to rack up phone bills. Facebook has an easy to use IM, messaging, and other ways of posting information. One feature is an event creator. Click on the event button and then there are easy to follow instructions that allow you to send a virtual invitation to whatever event you may be planning. This is way faster than individually inviting people or creating a bunch of invitations. Facebook is more cost and time efficient than a phone call or a text.
            Though it is free and easy to use, Facebook is detrimental to the traditional forms of communication. Face to face interactions have taken a back seat to things like phones and internet. Because of innovations like Facebook, people do not feel the need to talk in person anymore. Even a phone call is more personal than a Facebook message, but people still opt for the less personal and potentially easier way of communicating. Facebook has taken over the internet and made even e-mail irrelevant because of all its different features. If Facebook just got music like Myspace and a web-cam chat, there would be no need for any other social networking sights or in person contact. Of course people will still talk in person, but not as much as they would if they did not have an innovation like Facebook.
Communication has completely morphed the way that people communicate. Human beings are continually looking for better, faster, and cheaper ways to keep in touch from phones to automobiles. Though a newly popular addition to the social networking scene, Facebook has completely taken over. Facebook is the new telephone. With Facebook people can keep in touch with relatives and friends around the world which was once a problem of distance. However, Facebook does not just make it easier and more cost efficient to stay in touch with friends and family far away. Not only can we keep in touch with those far away, but we can also maintain relationships with those who we simply don’t see as much as we would like to. Facebook is superior to the phone because it does not cost anything and allows for simpler mass sharing than an e-mail. Facebook is the newest innovation in the battle to improve and quicken are human interactions.


Writing for an Audience

       For this blog we were required to describe a tradition in our family which revolves around food. I wanted to relate to my audience and not choose a tradition too unique. Therefore, I chose to speak about Thanksgiving since it is commonly celebrated in the United States. I definitely challenged the readers of my blog. While most people spoke of how nicely and often their families came together for holiday or just daily meals, I brought the other side of the spectrum by telling of how my family rarely eats together. Public writing such as this allowed me to show a little bit of my inner self to my colleagues. It has helped me grow as a writer by teaching me how to write for an audience rather than just a teacher or myself.

American Stereotypes

Thinking of a tradition in my family that surrounds food is incredibly hard. There are seven of us, my mom and six younger siblings, and it is rare if we eat at the same time, let alone same things. In fact, I am one of the only people who even use the dining table still, and I use it infrequently. It is easy to say then, that our only food tradition would have to be thanksgiving.

My mom is a great cook. I tell her all the time that the only reason I will visit in later years is so that she will cook for me. She has a full-time job and usually just wants to come home and sleep, but sometimes, usually weekends, she will make a feast for us kids. Thanksgiving is an entirely different story. Mom doesn't ask for much help in the kitchen, if ever, so generally speaking, she does all of the cooking: potatoes, gravy, corn, casserole, yams, several pies, different types of rolls, and, of course, the turkey. Dinner is something she takes great pride in. It breaks her heart whenever she runs out of time to make something and has to buy it from the store.

Thanksgiving is one of the several times we all sit down and eat together. Sometimes my grandparents, or family friends, will join us as well. Family dinners are something looked forward to probably only for the food. Though we love each other, I have never experienced a family dinner in which there was not an argument among my sisters. It hurts to see my mom's attempt at family unity fall to petty bickering, but usually, the arguing is in good humor and does not escalate too much.

I imagine one day, when we are all older, the fighting will only get worse, but I know that no matter what, we will come together on Thanksgiving in a show of our unconditional love for one another and our Mom.

Writer's Choice

For my “Writer’s Choice” piece, I chose the Identity Paper. This paper is a good example of my writing abilities. In this piece I was required to look at what shapes identity and how it shapes it. Some of the contributing factors that I believed to be most relevant were gender, ethnicity, and appearance.  In my opinion, I have a strong grasp on what identity is. My definition of identity, “the physical and abstract combination of what makes a person unique,” was strong and easily defendable with my examples of identity characteristics. This paper was meaningful to me because identity is something very important to me. These things that are a part of me are not just check marks on a list; they are who I am. I am defined by my identity and therefore think it is the most important thing about me.

Identity

In the film, "Edward Scissorhands," there are several examples of outsiders. The film uses a very storybook version of an outsider with Edward, who is simply feared because of his physical differences. We also see the idea of the outsider who blends well with Peg and Kim. While Peg is an Avon lady who seeks only to feel like she is doing something with her life other than lounging and gossiping, no one seems to support her efforts. Kim is an outsider because even when no one else was defending Edward, she did because she saw him as a person and not as only a deformity to be avoided. The cheery suburban area in which the characters reside leaves little room for individuality. Anyone who steps outside the lines is rejected or shamed unless they manage to somehow blend or stand out in a way that people appreciate. An outsider is someone who does not fit in with a group or community because of some difference in appearance, views, or way of life.

Edward is the most obvious example of an outsider. At the beginning of the movie, the gossipy women of the town are excited to meet and get to know the strange new man that Peg brought home. One religious neighbor does initially see Edward as some sort of devil creation and believes that he doesn't belong, but everyone is so dazzled that they ignore her for a while. Though incredibly different, Edward begins to fit in by cutting bushes and hair. It is only once Edward is accused of breaking and entering, and he rejects Joyce, that people begin to not like or trust him. Hearsay has an important role in the stereotypical suburban community and rumors of the crime and his alleged rape of Joyce spread so far that people begin to shun Edward. They decide that he is too different and therefore dangerous. His rejection is similar to the way they ignored Peg in her efforts to sell Avon.

From the beginning of the movie, it is obvious that the group mentality of the community was way to uniformity centered to ever truly accept Edward. Upon meeting him, people wanted to change him, regardless of his unique gifts or talents. They would rather have another cloned member of the community than to have this individual man with a special skill. Being an outsider or different was something that no one ever really accepted about Edward. The movie defines an outsider as someone like Edward. He may seem at first to fit in, but eventually, people get tired of him and the novelty of his differences wears off leaving nothing but a scary creature that they must rid themselves of.

This movie affirms my views on what it means to be an outsider. People get so caught up in fitting in that they think everyone else should be just as wrapped up in the idea of similarity. Popularity is way too important for people. At some point you see Kim start to branch out, even at the risk of rejection from her peers, because she knows that the way people are treating Edward is wrong. If more people could stand up for themselves and others, people would not bully each other as much. In the movie Jim died because he attacked Edward in a close-minded rage. Edward would probably have been hurt too if the unfeeling mob had reached him. An outsider is someone whose differences are so great that people feel their ways of life are being challenged. While Edward truly did not challenge anyone, just his presence went against what they believed and that made him dangerous to their way of life.

The people of this community are so similar, that anyone even slightly different is looked down upon. Edward got along with everyone when he first came to live with Peg. After time, he was not as exciting and the rumors took his reputation down to the very lowest peg possible. People in that town didn't commit crimes, and Edward was a criminal. Then they realized that people can't look like Edward and be safe or normal. They tried to use him and change him, but in the end, his physical differences were so overwhelming that they tried to destroy him. He was an outsider simply because of how he looked.

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